the following is a piece in question of if it should go into my writing portfolio.
it was the found poem we did a while back.
Orthodox war,
God is winning.
Disenchanted Zionists,
With assumed future.
A trickle of faith,
And a wave of six wars.
New Jewish prototype,
A robust hybrid nation.
The frontier age is over,
A Judaism comeback.
Israel political life,
A simple war to a complex question.
They too await the messiah.
Orthodoxy Fundamentalism.
They too closed up the heaven's forever.
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It should definately go in your portfolio.
I say yes!
"A simple war to a complex question." - Joy White
I would say so, this is my favorite line, so good. I think it is portfolio material.
definitly, i flows so nice, especially for a found poem...good job!
I'd put it in; that's quite cool. Where'd you find all the religious stuff? Was this around the school?
it was from an article in antional geographic.
thnxthnxthnx
im going with everyone else. i really like it.
it's very intense
but where the hell did you find all those jewish/religious words? "the modern jew" magazine?
and yea, nikons. canons are p***y cameras. feels like i'm gonna crush them when i'm holdin em
dont make fun of my spelling!
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